Front cover: has new cover photo. Bold black colours stand out. Needs more writing. Font title and size needs to be bigger and better. Photo has no background. If changed could look more interesting.
Contents: the photos look better but need more organising. Right side of page looks like it has been lazily thrown together. Needs colours that stand out more. Bigger font title needed.
Double Page Spread: Picture with guitar has the contrast up too high and brightness. Looks bad. Picture on left causing to much waste on text box and side of page.
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