Cover: Titled tile looks tacky. Should take out the tilt.
Photo has a close up of the models face – too close. Writing up the top of the
page should be spread around and more evenly placed like in previous magazines
I have researched. Font needs a better colour.
Contents: Font it the same and extremely big. Page needs
more writing. Title matches other pages but still looks tack. Different use of
colours, but too much pink writing is here. Too much pink in unsymmetrical
places makes the page look ugly and confused. Photo In the corner of the page
is bad. Too much contrast taking out of it. Looks squashed and placed in
corner, not the place for featured articles.
Double Page Spread: Background on this is very plain. Space
around the edge, and between photos makes it look empty. The title at the top
looks tacky and lazy. Only two photos, of two people in different place and of different
colours look tacky and leave a lot of space around it. All the text is the same
font and colour. Add different colours to the writing will make it easier to
read and look more appealing.
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