Front cover:
Contents:
Double page spread:
Front cover: Photograph changed. One model is now holding an
instrument and looking out towards the audience to grab their attention. Title
at top changed in to banner. Now looks much neater. Font changed. New font
looks much better than previous fonts used. Front colour dull. Do not stand out.
Photo looks dull. Colours on cover need changing. Needs barcode/price/date.
Contents: Pink only used on number. Changed photograph.
Title matches previous page. Needs bigger font on writing. Font on page title
needs to be bigger. Needs more writing.
Double Page Spread: Bad photos removed. Title font needs to
be bigger. Text font needs different colours. Photo standing on edge of text
box looks tacky. Too much space around one photo. Needs either bigger photo or
more photos.
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